Thoughts of You

temperature cold
inside this room
no moon tonight
darkness looms
shadows creep
across my dreams
fitful rest
for me it seems

shadows from
a recent time
fantasy plagues
memories remind
how much time
before it fades
thoughts of you
and yesterday
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 9:31 AM
Very nicely written.
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Great rhythm in this short verse. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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