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Thoughts of Winter

Cold frost snow means winter simply stunning such a scene with the frost on the ground covering all thats usually green You take an early morning walk in the crisp frost filled ground it crackles under your feet such crunching sound as you pound The air is biting and haunting your ears feel the cold nip as the trees rustles in the breeze the freezing water just does drip Such is the beauty of winter as attractive as any landscape it's a picture to savour from its view never to escape So relish the moment take in all of this scene it won't pass here again nature's way of being clean

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/18/2016 10:09:00 AM
A vivid visual write. Well done,Gordon. I like that crunching sound but it is rather chilling.
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 2/18/2016 10:37:00 AM
thanks Daniel, glad it was vivid piece for you!
Date: 2/18/2016 9:58:00 AM
Lovely pastoral piece, Gordon! Winter can indeed be captivating - It's just the bite of the biting wind - hard to overcome!
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Date: 2/18/2016 10:02:00 AM
thanks Michael, so glad you liked it, yes that biting wing is sore especially in last few weeks here in Scotland!

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