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Thoughts of Us

A feeling so true, In colors of blue, So often were the same, Its what keeps us both sain, We both feel were the ones to blame, Then I read your letter and remember why I came, Im sorry for my mistakes, I want to let you know I'm not fake, With you I'll never lose faith, I've never without a doubt felt this way, your the reason I wake up everyday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/7/2011 10:04:00 PM
nice ;}
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Date: 6/4/2011 12:31:00 PM
Very strong finish. Excellent read :)
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Date: 6/1/2011 4:13:00 PM
Beautiful. You love this person, no doubt.
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Date: 5/30/2011 8:25:00 AM
Creative and nice expressions, Scott
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Date: 5/30/2011 7:38:00 AM
Reads like one is in love for sure..Look at line three for a spelling error..Sara
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Date: 5/30/2011 7:32:00 AM
I loved this, Scott...nice work! Maggie
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Date: 5/29/2011 9:49:00 PM
just as sweet as rain, scott! hope to readd more of you! :) huggs, nette
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