Thoughts of Us

A feeling so true, In colors of blue,
So often were the same,
Its what keeps us both sain,
We both feel were the ones to blame,
Then I read your letter and remember why I came,
Im sorry for my mistakes,
I want to let you know I'm not fake,
With you I'll never lose faith,
I've never without a doubt felt this way,
your the reason I wake up everyday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Duncan Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 10:04 PM
nice ;}
Plotczyk Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 12:31 PM
Very strong finish. Excellent read :)
Fringe Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 4:13 PM
Beautiful. You love this person, no doubt.
Mehta Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 8:25 AM
Creative and nice expressions, Scott
Kendrick Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Reads like one is in love for sure..Look at line three for a spelling error..Sara
Mcafee Avatar
May 30, 2011 at 7:32 AM
I loved this, Scott...nice work! Maggie
Onclaud Avatar
May 29, 2011 at 9:49 PM
just as sweet as rain, scott! hope to readd more of you! :) huggs, nette
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