Thoughts of a Young Mind

puppies make me cry
blood and death
create a smile
i feel no warmth 
i feel nothing
no friends 
no family
death is looking at me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 18, 2016 at 1:48 AM
S S, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 2, 2015 at 11:06 PM
Steve, thank you for sharing.... Luv SKAT
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August 18, 2009 at 5:55 AM
Oh my what a sad piece you have here. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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August 17, 2009 at 2:53 PM
Different. Keep writing. Sara
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August 17, 2009 at 2:33 PM
The persona seems hurt shattered,cold,dead,heartfelt emotions and i hope you make many friends here,youyr friend charma:)
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