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Thoughts of a Young Mind

puppies make me cry blood and death create a smile i feel no warmth i feel nothing no friends no family death is looking at me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/18/2016 1:48:00 AM
S S, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:06:00 PM
Steve, thank you for sharing.... Luv SKAT
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Date: 8/18/2009 5:55:00 AM
Oh my what a sad piece you have here. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2009 2:53:00 PM
Different. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/17/2009 2:33:00 PM
The persona seems hurt shattered,cold,dead,heartfelt emotions and i hope you make many friends here,youyr friend charma:)
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