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Thoughts In Concert

1. Loose, frayed ends Of connecting threads Are left to wonder Which of the treacherous passages Pulled their unseasoned fragility Too tautly. 2. Is it the Repetition in an existence Of need and habit, Without nuance or sight, That fractures the heart of Tired connections? Perhaps, simply, the Twisting journey of Motion and rhythm That unravels The delicately wrapped cord As disorientation Turns it in circles? Or might it be something beautiful As when descant Diverges from melody?

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Date: 11/30/2008 8:21:00 AM
Beth - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/29/2008 7:49:00 PM
Beth - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 11/18/2008 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:12:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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