Thoughts - Edited On 7th July

~~~ We must think about thoughts, must rethink. Of what use are they to us. Images of mind, nothing useful they do. Many live in past day or future, not present. This folly does amaze! Waves of thoughts, emotions drenching them fully wet, at times they feel joyous but mostly fears, tears, sadness fills them. Past events, apprehension, end glee Wandering along the path of their mind and thoughts, they rarely live carefree. They exist in world of illusion, lost in thoughts, not enjoying present. This is stupid is my conclusion! ~~~ 22.07.2021 For Emile Pinet, A 3-6-9 Poem contest
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May Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 8:30 PM
Each day has its ups and downs, Nicely penned..
Hawkins Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 7:45 PM
I can relate to your poem Rama. So immersed in thoughts that I have no energy left to do anything else. I am sure not many people live carefree in these troubled times. Good Luck in the contest... Take care.. Shirley
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 4:18 PM
oh my the last line made me almost giggle. Why don't you think in the present? I sure enjoyed this one.
Kannan Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 9:12 AM
So true, sometimes, plenty of thoughts whirl around in our mind make us do nothing... Beautifully said... Good luck in the contest...
Evans Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Nicely done, Rama. Good luck.
Cunningham Avatar
July 22, 2021 at 8:01 AM
We get bombarded with thousands of them daily, some good, some bad. The bad ones we try to forget but it isnt easy. Good luck in the contest Rama. Tom
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