Thoughts Brought Together...

In earnest await
       as pride and humility
           reconcile itself....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 4:27 PM
A nice senryu with fine images
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July 28, 2010 at 11:51 AM
Interesting and thought provoking Senryu. Can pride and humility really reconcile? Can one have pride and humility at the same time? Pride stops, humility frees. Inner clarity perhaps is the reconciliation. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my latest. Caroline.
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July 28, 2010 at 11:28 AM
NICE ONE, ENJOYED -SKAT
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