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Thoughts Away

I had a thought
    It flew away
    Was that because
    it's not my day

    Perhaps
    the thought
    came to naught 
    Who's to say

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Caren Krutsinger

December 17, 2021 at 8:00 AM

My thoughts are gone so swiftly I am amazed when one returns and I think "hey, I had that one yesterday".

Jennifer Proxenos

December 12, 2021 at 1:13 PM

That has happened to me too, is it perhaps because we are getting younger ???!!! oh well, c'est la vie. Blessings, hugs, Jennifer

Panagiota Romios

December 12, 2021 at 4:54 AM

Indeed, I don't know where they go,,,, My brain goes blank. Best i have. A paper in front of me. Especially if I am writing a poem. Hugx, Pangie coxo

Lindsay Laurie

December 11, 2021 at 5:59 PM

Hello Gershon ... Phew! I thought this only happened to me - thanks once more Gershon - Lindsay

Mystic Rose Rose

December 11, 2021 at 5:59 PM

One day it might return to you, stronger and more ingrained, :)

Anselmo Boles

December 11, 2021 at 5:58 PM

Sometimes just a light breeze can take it away. Perhaps a lapse in memory? Just another moment in the life of G.W. Cheer up!...ab

Deb M

December 11, 2021 at 5:30 PM

Everyday occurrence for me Wershon! Cute and relatable (not you ) the poem !! Hehe . Debx

Gershon Wolf

December 12, 2021 at 4:25 PM

Hey, Deb: If I can't get 'cute,' I'll take 'relatable.' ~ Chicago Bull

John Lawless

December 11, 2021 at 5:12 PM

"I thought I thought a thought but the thought I thought I thought was not the thought I thought I thought. It seems the thoughts I think I think always lead me to rethink the thought I thought I thought and the thought I thought, I think" Old poem from a twisted mind...

Gershon Wolf

December 12, 2021 at 4:21 PM

OK, I shall think about all of this, John. Might take me a few nanoseconds to get to the bottom of it though. Thanks for the deep enlightenment, man! ~ Contemplating my navel

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