Thoughts and Prayers

Thoughts and Prayers


This life can be hard and not very fair
You are in our thoughts and specifically this prayer

We store many memories to help keep us sane
Recall them all often, they’ll help ease the pain

Such a tragic loss has no rhythm or rhyme
There are no magic words that will bring healing with time

Chaos can ensue when life’s order is defiled
There is no greater pain than the loss of a child

A prayer will be sent with the next evening star
May God heal your heart, each battle wound and scar

This plea is for peace in the path set for you
I pray that God’s light turns your black sky to blue

11-13-2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 9:27 AM
Well-written and show such marvelous, heart-felt empathy. Good that you wrote this, Mark.
Koplin Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 9:51 AM
Thanks Milt
M  Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:12 AM
Hi mark….what beautiful words! Is that for your friend who’s sister died was she a child? Sad sad sad !Debx
Koplin Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:30 AM
I wrote it for my friend’s Mom. She is really struggling with the loss of her daughter.
Pandit Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:08 AM
Much grace in these words of prayer, Mark. Deeply moving, heartfelt write.
Koplin Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Thanks Vijay
Logan Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 6:07 AM
This is an excellent show of empathy for those who've lost a child. Good writing, Mark.
Koplin Avatar
November 13, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Thank you so much Jenna, I appreciate that.
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