Thoughts

if this reality is nothing more than the thoughts we manifest 
than it is the thought of you i hold so dear in the cavity of my chest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Neels Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 6:03 AM
You say so much with these two lines John :) enjoyed!!
Wesley Avatar
June 22, 2012 at 8:32 PM
I hear the ol heart beating in the cavity of your chest. I'm sure there is room for all those feelings. Two lines say it all!
Nutter Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 4:24 PM
Excellent write, a haiku I think.
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 7:59 AM
Love it!!! Real smooth!!
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 12:47 AM
A lovely thought for a loved one, John.
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