Thoughts

You have one
Yes sad and even fun
Every person has them each day

They flow within the heart, mind, which is what they say.
Involving structure, to explore every way,
Without, we would lose humanity.

Losing humility
Certainty

Never to be none
The day mankind disappears
No new life begun
End of times has erupted.
Passions no longer exist.

When upon this day is done.
Time will have stopped forever more.
Humankind will have lost the score.
Along with no gain or pun, 

Wills forgotten nothing to shun,
Stripped down to core,
When upon this day is done.
Time will have stopped forever more.

This thing I speak, under the sun.
We’ll have no quality to store,
No, need for anything for sure
No thoughts sheltered or let run.
When upon this day is done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 11/8/2010 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, cecil
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Cecil in Jared Pickett's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 1:40:00 PM
Cecil ..well deserved HM in contest. Gud usage of all three forms Luv/Best wishes....Hitendra Mehta cecil
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Date: 11/7/2010 12:42:00 PM
Congratulations Cecil on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:31:00 AM
Congrats Cecil on your HM in Jared's contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy this special honor all your won this happy Sunday with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your success in Jared's contest, Cecil! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:12:00 PM
This one is very interesting, Cecil. I think everyone thinks of these kinds of things from time to time. One to truly ponder! Loved the repeating idea running thru it. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/6/2010 10:33:00 AM
Interesting topic, thought provoking as well ;)
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Date: 11/6/2010 9:36:00 AM
Stopping by today just to thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Always a pleasure to read your poetry Cecil. Love,Carol
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Date: 11/6/2010 8:31:00 AM
very strong write here my friend
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Date: 11/6/2010 8:07:00 AM
Some people dread this final day, Cecil, but if we meet in heaven that day I know we will share a smile. There is no way to reverse the past and surely we will have no needs in heaven. Excellent work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/6/2010 5:47:00 AM
Interesting thoughts penned in these lines..I am glad that I stopped by and read this one..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..Sara
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Date: 11/3/2010 5:11:00 PM
I find it amazig that you chose to write of thoughts. Thoughts are one of the best things about being human! This is amazing Cecil! Oh, and I noticed you know my nickname lol do we know each other? or did you do research on me? lol
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Date: 11/2/2010 5:06:00 AM
Sad and fun are the parts of our every life, hOW TRUE? cecil
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