Thoughts

You have one
Yes sad and even fun
Every person has them each day

They flow within the heart, mind, which is what they say.
Involving structure, to explore every way,
Without, we would lose humanity.

Losing humility
Certainty

Never to be none
The day mankind disappears
No new life begun
End of times has erupted.
Passions no longer exist.

When upon this day is done.
Time will have stopped forever more.
Humankind will have lost the score.
Along with no gain or pun, 

Wills forgotten nothing to shun,
Stripped down to core,
When upon this day is done.
Time will have stopped forever more.

This thing I speak, under the sun.
We’ll have no quality to store,
No, need for anything for sure
No thoughts sheltered or let run.
When upon this day is done.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
November 8, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, cecil
Brown Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 2:48 PM
Congratulations on your win Cecil in Jared Pickett's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Cecil ..well deserved HM in contest. Gud usage of all three forms Luv/Best wishes....Hitendra Mehta cecil
Freeman Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 12:42 PM
Congratulations Cecil on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Congrats Cecil on your HM in Jared's contest with this excellent entry my friend.. enjoy this special honor all your won this happy Sunday with lots of luv..
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November 7, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations on your success in Jared's contest, Cecil! Love, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 3:12 PM
This one is very interesting, Cecil. I think everyone thinks of these kinds of things from time to time. One to truly ponder! Loved the repeating idea running thru it. LUv, Andrea
Neels Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Interesting topic, thought provoking as well ;)
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Stopping by today just to thank you for your kind comments. Have a wonderful weekend and keep your pen flowing. Always a pleasure to read your poetry Cecil. Love,Carol
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November 6, 2010 at 8:31 AM
very strong write here my friend
Devonshire Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 8:07 AM
Some people dread this final day, Cecil, but if we meet in heaven that day I know we will share a smile. There is no way to reverse the past and surely we will have no needs in heaven. Excellent work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Interesting thoughts penned in these lines..I am glad that I stopped by and read this one..Thanks for stopping by and reading my work..Sara
Taylor Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 5:11 PM
I find it amazig that you chose to write of thoughts. Thoughts are one of the best things about being human! This is amazing Cecil! Oh, and I noticed you know my nickname lol do we know each other? or did you do research on me? lol
Mehta Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 5:06 AM
Sad and fun are the parts of our every life, hOW TRUE? cecil
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