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The day is hiding in the night's hinges. Tired eyes displace the falling light. My thoughts wander with the waves of remembrance like lonely clouds, fading in the wind. History hides its torn face behind trees and fields, becomes unreal. The bone china petals of the orchid on my window sill brighten my day. My thoughts lay off their heaviness and lead me back to present.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/13/2010 9:15:00 PM
this is breathtakingly beautiful. You should do a book of all your many poems like this one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:29:00 PM
o and what visually full wondrous thought these are, so well written, your thoughts give me calm ones
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Date: 8/11/2009 4:42:00 AM
Splendid writing Gert.Keep that pen flowing my friend. Thank you for your comments. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2009 1:44:00 AM
Beautiful. Just amazingly beautiful. -AmandaLG
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Date: 8/10/2009 4:21:00 PM
Nicely written. Sara
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