ThOuGhTs

From when l wake untill l go to bed
    Wheather boarder line or profound
  These thoughts that are in my head
   That constantly go round and round

    Perhaps at times lm simply missread
    But that dose not really anymore astowd
     Even if l just simply play dumb or dead
     It would seem then am l safe and sound

    
   Though being carful where l then tread
    Will l ever find some higher ground
      Its like every single day l now dread
     As by my thoughts l often feel bound


   An exstension of poems a state of mind l against l 
A state of comfusion ect 




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Breidenthal Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 5:38 PM
Love this one David! I can relate to this piece—feeling bound to my own thoughts. Always, Laura
Scott Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 4:53 AM
Thankyoo made l did do a rewrite of this one xx
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