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Thoughtless

thoughtless inaction seaside sickness spreads in waves tsunami lays bare taste wild strawberry high mountain meadow sunset thoughtless inaction

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Date: 2/1/2024 8:45:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:51:00 PM
steven, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:50:00 PM
Steven, thank you for sharing. A pleasure to read... SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2015 8:52:00 PM
This double haiku is very well done and you show impressive skill in writing them. Thanks for sharing.
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/10/2015 5:04:00 AM
thankyou very much charles, its an interesting form
Date: 3/7/2015 10:54:00 AM
loved the haiku my friend...rajat
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Steven Hanlon
Date: 3/7/2015 6:16:00 PM
thankyou rajat, my first effort

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