Thought of the day

drifting through swampy marshlands of desire ~
time taunts readying the funeral fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:23 AM
Dear US, This is incredibly concise and carries a massive punch. What makes it so sharp is the sudden, stark realization of consequence right at the end. Autumn Blessings, Dear US, Daniel
Seeker Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 9:11 PM
The truth is usually inconvenient and unapologetic :)
Somadas Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 10:17 PM
wow.. darkly vivid and intense.. Good one Seeker..
Seeker Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 3:19 AM
Thank you, Jenish.
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