Thought of the Day

Each soul journey is unique ~
Into which no one can peek

We may share but none can pair ~
Save those who are self-aware

Secrets hidden in plain sight ~
Cognised by spherical sight 

20-May-2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Thomas Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 4:13 PM
There is so much organic mystery woven through your lines here. I particularly like the second stanza and the aural quality of "can pair" giving an echo of "compare". There also is something lyrical about "spherical sight" that seems to intimate a zoomed-out worldview. Really well done - it'll have me thinking for a while.
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November 28, 2023 at 9:22 PM
Thank you, JT. As Bruce Lee said, ‘don’t think, just feel!’
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