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Thought of the Day

Each soul journey is unique ~ Into which no one can peek We may share but none can pair ~ Save those who are self-aware Secrets hidden in plain sight ~ Cognised by spherical sight 20-May-2023

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Jaymee Thomas

Date: 11/28/2023 4:13:00 PM

There is so much organic mystery woven through your lines here. I particularly like the second stanza and the aural quality of "can pair" giving an echo of "compare". There also is something lyrical about "spherical sight" that seems to intimate a zoomed-out worldview. Really well done - it'll have me thinking for a while.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 11/28/2023 9:22:00 PM

Thank you, JT. As Bruce Lee said, ‘don’t think, just feel!’