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Thought Bubble Wrapped

The lock clucks once as if to chide You best let bygones be The door growls loud as if to warn There's nothing here to see Peering through the dim-lit gloom I heave a quizzical sigh A mocking echo parrots me: Where memories go to die Forty years stacked and packed Thought-bubble-wrapped collection Brooding bronze, mahogany desk A dense mass of recollection Now, where is that which I seek... My parents’ old photo book? Where everyone looks so hale and young It will take some time to look French armoire, Persian rug, Chinese chairs A frightful Congo mask Searching on such a global scale Is quite the daunting task The storage fees are adding up I should sell it all, I should Let it all just fly away On wings of copper, silk and wood But all this meant so much to them Mosaic memory of vanished days Within these walls, as in my heart The echo of them yet stays _____________________________ For contest: Any Poem Meaningful to You Sponsored by: Broken Wings ______________________________ Originally posted: Feb 23, 2016 (subsequently deleted)

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Date: 5/31/2016 12:32:00 AM
a deserving win, such an excellent write:)... ~Linda~
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Date: 5/13/2016 5:05:00 PM
nice reading your poem this evening
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 5/30/2016 9:48:00 PM
Hi Dark Times, Please accept this very belated thank you for your nice message. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/28/2016 2:13:00 PM
Gimme sum of dat,Ha ha Good poem
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/29/2016 6:36:00 PM
Ha ha, good one Elliot. Thanks for stopping by and for the encouraging comment. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/24/2016 10:17:00 AM
Brian, this was another amazing work by you.. You have so much of ttalent... I must say your usage of words and the way they are placed is simply amazing ! Mosaic memory~ very thoughtful Brooding bronze... Fantastic... I have missed your poems... Glad that you posted this amazing work.. Hugs Red
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/24/2016 6:31:00 PM
Hi Red, Thank you very much for the amazingly generous comment. That is so very kind of you. I'm glad you liked the poem and those little alliterations.. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/23/2016 6:56:00 AM
Excellent write! Could picture it all and feel the sadness Congrats!
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/24/2016 6:25:00 PM
Hi Susan, Thank you very much for having a read and for leaving such a nice comment. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/21/2016 2:38:00 PM
Tough to let go, congratulations Brian, great write...
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/22/2016 8:19:00 PM
Hi Charlie, Thank you very much. I greatly appreciate the kind words. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/20/2016 8:47:00 PM
Awwww, I am so glad to see this one won!! it makes you want to sigh, and it's very meaningful Congrats to you.
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 9:38:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you very much for swinging by again. I really appreciate the nice sentiments. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/20/2016 8:22:00 PM
Very deep, Brian. I have been there, and I know the pain. You have expressed this so well. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7, Sandra
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 9:33:00 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you very much. I really appreciate the kind words. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/20/2016 12:50:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Brian
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 12:55:00 PM
Hi Joseph, Thank you very much for having a read and for the congrats. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/20/2016 12:40:00 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 12:53:00 PM
The heck! Sorry--somehow this reply got added to the wrong spot--that was for Laura (below)! But thank you, BL, for your very kind words. I really appreciate it. Cheers, Brian
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 12:52:00 PM
Hi Laura, Thank you very much! Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/20/2016 11:54:00 AM
Brian, congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 12:55:00 PM
Hi Laura, Thank you very much! Cheers, Brian
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 12:54:00 PM
Hi Laura, Thank you very much! Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/20/2016 2:19:00 AM
I can relate to this to much Brian, having lost dad and clearing the house when mum went into care it is so hard to dispose of everything they held so dear. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 10:12:00 AM
I'm sorry Jan, mixed up your name with another awesome poet. Please accept my apologies!
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 10:10:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Thank you so much, It's comforting that so many people can relate. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/19/2016 8:41:00 PM
A very deep and sentimental write Brian.....well written... 7 ..
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 10:13:00 AM
Hi Joseph, Thank you very much, I appreciate it and am glad you liked it. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/19/2016 3:53:00 PM
This one makes me kind of sad because I have two kids almost 40 and I know they probably look forward to tossing out all my stuff. I love that you still are holding back. It shows great thoughtfulness. fantastic poem.
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/20/2016 10:09:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Thank you very much, I appreciate the kind words. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/19/2016 2:22:00 AM
You would be throwing away a part of them Brian...I understand. You have expressed this deep love and reverence for your parents beautifully in your entry Brian. I hope to see this take top honors! # 7 :)
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/19/2016 3:18:00 PM
Hi Connie, Thank you very much for the kind sentiments, much appreciated. Cheers, Brian
Date: 4/16/2016 10:18:00 PM
Brian, we can 't hang unto stuff forever even though they hold emotional value for us. Your poem conveys this quite well. ~ Sonia
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Brian Mcclain
Date: 4/18/2016 3:13:00 PM
Hi Sonia, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving that nice comment. Cheers, Brian

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