Thought Bubble Wrapped

The lock clucks once as if to chide
You best let bygones be
The door growls loud as if to warn
There's nothing here to see

Peering through the dim-lit gloom
I heave a quizzical sigh
A mocking echo parrots me:
Where memories go to die

Forty years stacked and packed
Thought-bubble-wrapped collection
Brooding bronze, mahogany desk
A dense mass of recollection

Now, where is that which I seek...
My parents’ old photo book?
Where everyone looks so hale and young
It will take some time to look

French armoire, Persian rug, Chinese chairs
A frightful Congo mask
Searching on such a global scale
Is quite the daunting task

The storage fees are adding up
I should sell it all, I should
Let it all just fly away 
On wings of copper, silk and wood

But all this meant so much to them
Mosaic memory of vanished days
Within these walls, as in my heart
The echo of them yet stays

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Originally posted: Feb 23, 2016 
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May 31, 2016 at 12:32 AM
a deserving win, such an excellent write:)... ~Linda~
Times Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 5:05 PM
nice reading your poem this evening
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May 30, 2016 at 9:48 PM
Hi Dark Times, Please accept this very belated thank you for your nice message. Cheers, Brian
Sutton Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 2:13 PM
Gimme sum of dat,Ha ha Good poem
Mcclain Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 6:36 PM
Ha ha, good one Elliot. Thanks for stopping by and for the encouraging comment. Cheers, Brian
Fiery Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Brian, this was another amazing work by you.. You have so much of ttalent... I must say your usage of words and the way they are placed is simply amazing ! Mosaic memory~ very thoughtful Brooding bronze... Fantastic... I have missed your poems... Glad that you posted this amazing work.. Hugs Red
Mcclain Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 6:31 PM
Hi Red, Thank you very much for the amazingly generous comment. That is so very kind of you. I'm glad you liked the poem and those little alliterations.. Cheers, Brian
Palli Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Excellent write! Could picture it all and feel the sadness Congrats!
Mcclain Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 6:25 PM
Hi Susan, Thank you very much for having a read and for leaving such a nice comment. Cheers, Brian
Smith Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 2:38 PM
Tough to let go, congratulations Brian, great write...
Mcclain Avatar
April 22, 2016 at 8:19 PM
Hi Charlie, Thank you very much. I greatly appreciate the kind words. Cheers, Brian
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 8:47 PM
Awwww, I am so glad to see this one won!! it makes you want to sigh, and it's very meaningful Congrats to you.
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Hi Andrea, Thank you very much for swinging by again. I really appreciate the nice sentiments. Cheers, Brian
Haight Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 8:22 PM
Very deep, Brian. I have been there, and I know the pain. You have expressed this so well. Congratulations on your First Place win. 7, Sandra
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Hi Sandra, Thank you very much. I really appreciate the kind words. Cheers, Brian
May Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:50 PM
Congrats on your top win Brian
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Hi Joseph, Thank you very much for having a read and for the congrats. Cheers, Brian
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April 20, 2016 at 12:40 PM
Congrats on your great win with this beautiful poem. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:53 PM
The heck! Sorry--somehow this reply got added to the wrong spot--that was for Laura (below)! But thank you, BL, for your very kind words. I really appreciate it. Cheers, Brian
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:52 PM
Hi Laura, Thank you very much! Cheers, Brian
Scars Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Brian, congrats on your top placement in the contest :)-luloo
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:55 PM
Hi Laura, Thank you very much! Cheers, Brian
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 12:54 PM
Hi Laura, Thank you very much! Cheers, Brian
Allison Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 2:19 AM
I can relate to this to much Brian, having lost dad and clearing the house when mum went into care it is so hard to dispose of everything they held so dear. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:12 AM
I'm sorry Jan, mixed up your name with another awesome poet. Please accept my apologies!
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Hi Andrea, Thank you so much, It's comforting that so many people can relate. Cheers, Brian
May Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 8:41 PM
A very deep and sentimental write Brian.....well written... 7 ..
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Hi Joseph, Thank you very much, I appreciate it and am glad you liked it. Cheers, Brian
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April 19, 2016 at 3:53 PM
This one makes me kind of sad because I have two kids almost 40 and I know they probably look forward to tossing out all my stuff. I love that you still are holding back. It shows great thoughtfulness. fantastic poem.
Mcclain Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Hi Andrea, Thank you very much, I appreciate the kind words. Cheers, Brian
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 2:22 AM
You would be throwing away a part of them Brian...I understand. You have expressed this deep love and reverence for your parents beautifully in your entry Brian. I hope to see this take top honors! # 7 :)
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April 19, 2016 at 3:18 PM
Hi Connie, Thank you very much for the kind sentiments, much appreciated. Cheers, Brian
Walker Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 10:18 PM
Brian, we can 't hang unto stuff forever even though they hold emotional value for us. Your poem conveys this quite well. ~ Sonia
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April 18, 2016 at 3:13 PM
Hi Sonia, Thank you very much for reading my poem and leaving that nice comment. Cheers, Brian
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