Thought

if I close my eyes
I will miss all the good stuff
sometimes, I just nap
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Adeite Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 8:07 AM
wonderful haiku.Keep your pens dancing to the drumbeat of your passion. You are such a wonderful poet. With love, Adeleke
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June 16, 2010 at 7:15 AM
hm, is this saying they close their eyes and they remember just reflecting on things they miss and they doze off with that thought to their mind giving the mind more time to relive their happy memories... enjoyed your write..P.D.
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June 16, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Some people seem to feel that way...Keep the creative pen flowing.Sara
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