Though Grey Clouds Part 2

Though the grey clouds of mist
I can see things I've figured 
This life is mine
I chose my path
I make my bed
 I just  might laugh
The pain is in my head

People on the street
No where to stay 
A women with a husband that beat on her
A 12th grader still in school

Though the grey clouds
There is a sun
That is trying to peak though
But there are clouds that
over ride the sun
Just like the smile
That try to come out on my face 
There are so many grey clouds
blocking the way
Like hurt, pain, broking hearts 
and ect..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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January 8, 2012 at 9:28 PM
Yes life like the clouds can distort our view of the sun but as you say it is still shining even in our pain- and we can still smile it is ours- like when we write our story and change the scenes that aren't so good-hope that better days will come. love and blessings, Brenda
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