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Those Night Shoes Behind the pane of storefront glass, upon a pedestal, they stand, ornate, black, sexy- six-inch heels- these special shoes my dreams command. A night out with a chosen love- to dance and whirl within his arms; my night shoes joyously will send me to new worlds of hidden charms. Oh, how they beckon me, those shoes! Come try me on, their whispers say; We'll take you to your land of dreams where lovers dance the night away. Tears fill my eyes- and right on time, my mother turns my chair around. Not now, night shoes- I'm on my way to see a doctor whom I found- for my prosthesis- cause, you see- I am a right leg amputee. Sandra M. Haight ~6th Place~ Premiere Contest: Night Shoes Sponsor: Anthony Slausen Judged: 05/25/2019

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Date: 5/25/2019 7:29:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Sandra! Lovely and sad! Janice
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Date: 5/25/2019 5:59:00 PM
Well done, Sandra, with this winning surprise twist.
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