Those Loving Eyes

This poem is a collaboration between myself and Jimmy Anderson#0459587
Jimmy wrote Those, I wrote Loving and we shared eyes!


T ime seems to stand still when looking deeply into your eyes
H ypnotizing me at will, taking me to paradise
O ceans of deep blue, riding the waves of your irises
S o stuck on you like the most contagious of viruses!
E xcitedly, I'm under your control, staring deeply into your soul
 
L ost in a whrilpool of your intire being
O nly you my love, my eyes are seeing
V isions of your beauty, sends me floating above
I ntoxicated I swim in your ocean of love
N avagating a journey so your heart will transpire
G iving my all, to fulfill your every desire
 
E levated I'm flying like a bird, watch me soar
Y our eyes of pure love, I compleatly adore
E scape with me for eternity to paradise
S howing me the way with those loving eyes!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bien Avatar
May 22, 2010 at 6:08 PM
Fantastic acostic :) JB
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May 11, 2010 at 7:01 PM
Great write very beautifully penned by you and Jimmy. Amazingly beautiful Poem my friend. And congratulations on your Book with by best wishes. Love and best wishes...Ravindra ....Simone Segal
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April 29, 2010 at 12:47 PM
this is a beautiful poem that you and Kimmy did together.espacially "staring deeoly into your soul" through those loving eyes.(: truly wonderful.the both of you. -Always&Forever Lynette
Anderson Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 5:18 PM
Yes, I loved our Acrostic!! Your words were magical..check e-mail for new collaboration..This one's a challengeLOL Hope your like it..I can't received your book if it's sent directly from you..have to come directly from the publishers or book store...hugs, Jimmy
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April 26, 2010 at 4:16 PM
amazing piece!- edward
Haick Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 6:42 PM
Hey Simone, I've been so busy!! Great collaboration with Jimmy! I enjoyed this very much! Love, Audrey
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April 21, 2010 at 8:05 PM
I say it is a good duo. enjoyed the write from both of you guys. A beauty from the eyes of two..p.d.
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