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Those Loving Eyes

This poem is a collaboration between myself and Jimmy Anderson#0459587 Jimmy wrote Those, I wrote Loving and we shared eyes! T ime seems to stand still when looking deeply into your eyes H ypnotizing me at will, taking me to paradise O ceans of deep blue, riding the waves of your irises S o stuck on you like the most contagious of viruses! E xcitedly, I'm under your control, staring deeply into your soul L ost in a whrilpool of your intire being O nly you my love, my eyes are seeing V isions of your beauty, sends me floating above I ntoxicated I swim in your ocean of love N avagating a journey so your heart will transpire G iving my all, to fulfill your every desire E levated I'm flying like a bird, watch me soar Y our eyes of pure love, I compleatly adore E scape with me for eternity to paradise S howing me the way with those loving eyes!

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Date: 5/22/2010 6:08:00 PM
Fantastic acostic :) JB
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:01:00 PM
Great write very beautifully penned by you and Jimmy. Amazingly beautiful Poem my friend. And congratulations on your Book with by best wishes. Love and best wishes...Ravindra ....Simone Segal
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Date: 4/29/2010 12:47:00 PM
this is a beautiful poem that you and Kimmy did together.espacially "staring deeoly into your soul" through those loving eyes.(: truly wonderful.the both of you. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 4/28/2010 5:18:00 PM
Yes, I loved our Acrostic!! Your words were magical..check e-mail for new collaboration..This one's a challengeLOL Hope your like it..I can't received your book if it's sent directly from you..have to come directly from the publishers or book store...hugs, Jimmy
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Date: 4/26/2010 4:16:00 PM
amazing piece!- edward
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Date: 4/23/2010 6:42:00 PM
Hey Simone, I've been so busy!! Great collaboration with Jimmy! I enjoyed this very much! Love, Audrey
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Date: 4/21/2010 8:05:00 PM
I say it is a good duo. enjoyed the write from both of you guys. A beauty from the eyes of two..p.d.
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