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Those Little Words

THOSE LITTLE WORDS
I don’t know why I spoke those words; They seemed to come from nowhere. She seemed surprised, of course she would, We’d never sought to go there. We’d lived next door since childhood, Close, like brother with sister. But, until the night in question, I’d never even kissed her. The scene, our school reunion. In the middle of July. We didn’t go there together, I don’t remember why. But, when the evening ended, With the lighting turned down low, We found ourselves together In the Viennese so slow We were gliding, not too expertly, Over the polished floor When, out of the blue, it hit me, The feeling I couldn’t ignore. Body to body, cheek to cheek Quite suddenly I knew. I whispered quietly to her Those three words, “I love you.” 4th September 2020 A Lipogram contest Sponsor - Emile Pinet

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Date: 9/15/2020 7:49:00 AM
so sweet and romantic Bryn, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2020 2:58:00 PM
So sweet and tender, Bryn - lost love found. High fives and kudos on your podium win.
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Date: 9/14/2020 2:32:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading your work! Great job and congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/14/2020 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations Bryn, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. This was one of the hardest contest I’ve ever had to judge, the quality of the poems entered were outstanding and yours one of them, well written my friend, Emile.
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