Those Cloven Hooves

The graveyard is brighter than usual this night
With snow tinted blue in the full moon’s light
He climbs from his grave for his Halloween walk
But cloven hoof-prints in the snow make him baulk

For right here and now on this All Hallows’ eve
Though October snow he can see and believe
He lingers aghast on that snow covered floor
Where two more hoof-prints make a tally of four

He puts down his head and it’s face is irate
As it studies the hoof-prints in snow by the gate
This night he must wander the graveyard alone
So four cloven hoof-prints he shall not condone

Two devils or maybe two mischievous imps
Cavorting and prancing like demonic chimps
But where are those two tiny demons residing
A holly bush moves, is that where they’re hiding?

Retrieving his head which he holds by its hair
He asks in a guttural voice, “Who be there?”
First comes a grunt then the mist of a breath
But no human breathes when he be in death

The juice of red berries or blood of the dead
Whatever it be it be splattered and red
He glares at those dark crimson stains in the snow
and says, “If you’ve eaten your fill you must go.”

Out from the holly a dark shadow moves
The corpse makes a count of the four cloven hooves
He says, “I’m the one who must make this night gory
So, Rudolph, you’re early, get out of my story.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 10/30/2022 7:31:00 PM
That red-nosed rain-drear always looking for love in all the wrong places! As cute as cute can be, Terry! :) gw
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Terry Flood
Date: 10/31/2022 12:56:00 AM
Do I get the prize for bringing up Christmas in October? Maybe I’ll try for September next year. Terry
Date: 10/30/2022 12:01:00 PM
(chuckling) Well-told story, Terry.
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Date: 10/30/2022 12:09:00 PM
Thanks, Milt. I crossed my fingers and hoped that the snow wouldn’t give the game away. Terry
Date: 10/30/2022 4:38:00 AM
Lol, I always like to be early for any appointment but this is taking the P, Shops are already full of christmas tat (all from China I might add) Love your trademark twist Terry. Tom
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Date: 10/30/2022 6:33:00 AM
Thanks, Tom. Early?… I wrote this with Christmas 2024 in mind ;-) Terry
Date: 10/30/2022 2:23:00 AM
What a fantastic twist! Love it! Elizabeth
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Date: 10/30/2022 6:32:00 AM
Thanks, Elizabeth. Glad you enjoyed my Halloween offering. Terry
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