Those Amazing Eyes

Just one look was all it took for me to fall so madly in love!
Without a sound you held me spellbound and your eyes I couldn't get enough of!

In your eyes I begin to swim in the irises of your soul, which unlocked your heart's door.
You came into my life pulling me from that dark hole; and in your heart I explored each 
corridor!

Your pupils seem to hypnotize, putting me in a state of bliss.
In your eyes I watch the sunrise, and I can't help but reminisce.

I travel to another time, to another place, and I can't help but smile.
With this pen I write a rhyme, as I look at your pretty face makes each couplet worthwhile!

You have my heart doing back flips, which causes my emotions to energize;
And it's just a plus for you to have perfect lips to go with those amazing eyes!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Thomer Avatar
November 2, 2010 at 4:28 PM
This was a beautiful poem Jimmy. Great structure as well with deep emotion rooting in the heart. Another good one, keep it up, hope your Halloween was well :). --Madison
Babcock Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 11:14 AM
The love bug hit and hypnotized you. This is such a sweet poem Jimmy. Love is great. Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it. God Bless Phyl
Alford Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 4:41 PM
very sweet :) love, steph
Sweetheart Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Sweet write Jimmy ..enjoyed the honesty of how the eyes can do so much.. my hubby has those deep green eyes that twinkle and that was enough to touch my own heart... as his says about my big brown ones.. so luv.. u have truly captured the magic and essence in your lines.. enjoyed my friend with luv..
Haick Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 10:51 AM
Equisite write, JAM....This is what I'm talking about..written so very well..I totally enjoyed..Love, Audrey
Hales Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 10:25 AM
oh my god this is wonderfull ...so from your heart x sarah xx
Roberts Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 7:34 AM
nice Jimmy, sweet poem
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