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She was a torpedo into my heart and I loved her swimming through my soul... Never had I beheld such beauty this splendour within her words; enjoying the masquerade Whileas these seasons their reasons came then went; but she couldn't let go even after the curtain Had rent this page thus drawn ? Which made myself love her even more yet she was hard ball Nine innings as determined and whom can blame her this princess of time ? Better a queen.. Pride in a crown with diamonds these jewels, sparkling while Angels smile then whisper ? She my darling Thought that I was but a mere child this breath it's passing breeze perhaps until, I grasp my Father's wings.

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Date: 8/7/2013 11:57:00 AM
Totally BEAUTIFUL! I hung on to each word, each line.... just amazing. Thank you for sharing your talent again :) Lucinda
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Date: 8/6/2013 2:45:00 AM
Love the whole poem but the next to last line is just super...Beautiful descriptions and metaphors throughout - Tim
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