Those About To Rock We Salute You

She was a torpedo into my heart and I loved her swimming through my soul...
Never had I beheld such beauty this splendour within her words; enjoying the masquerade
Whileas these seasons their reasons came then went; but she couldn't let go even after the curtain 
Had rent this page thus drawn ? Which made myself love her even more yet she was hard ball 
Nine innings as determined and whom can blame her this princess of time ? Better a queen..
Pride in a crown with diamonds these jewels, sparkling while Angels smile then whisper ? She my darling
Thought that I was but a mere child this breath it's passing breeze perhaps until, I grasp my Father's wings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lu Avatar
August 7, 2013 at 11:57 AM
Totally BEAUTIFUL! I hung on to each word, each line.... just amazing. Thank you for sharing your talent again :) Lucinda
Ryerson Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 2:45 AM
Love the whole poem but the next to last line is just super...Beautiful descriptions and metaphors throughout - Tim
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