Thorns and Tears

For thorns that dig so deep
my tears are so incomplete
tears that fall hardened to the floor
there will never be a cure
just darkened thoughts forever more    5th october 2010
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Kendrick Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 12:38 PM
Good work in this one. Way to go. Sara
Haick Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 8:34 AM
I thank you for sharing this Duncan. I believe that tears do heal...and you men ofen feel that you shouldn't cry..but it helps and it doesn't make you any less than a man. We all need to learn to let go sometimes. Peace, love, Audrey
Culverhouse Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 5:29 PM
ever --ever --e ve er! echoing to infinity and beyoond. Had to make a joke it sounds so final and dooms day!
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