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Thorns About the Snow

Thorns about the snow Cantilever tombstones Gathered in a row Broken bits of someone else’s deed Weeds are overgrown Thorns about the snow Endless come the struggles as you bleed Ravens are amassing High above the trees Searching for remaining shards of bone Circling intruders Cutting through the breeze Waiting as your sins you now atone Thicket mangled wings Fractured fighting fear Carving sad initials on your skin Thunder clouds approach Storms to gather near Drenching darkened sorrows now begin Iron barred protrusions Block the jagged way Keeping you from exiting this place Fall upon your knees This your ending day Every thought of you to soon erase Fade into the gravel Claw this frozen earth Quickly 'fore a morning sun does crest Bid a found farewell Far beyond your birth Time has come to take your final rest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/19/2018 12:39:00 PM
There is a bit of dark desperation expressed in this poem that shares the darkness with the reader. I have a chill. Your work always inspires Chris, rather light or dark! : )
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2018 1:15:00 PM
Hi Connie, yes it is a bit dark and that was the mood I was in when I wrote it. It happens I guess, can't be all love and lollipops all of the time. :) I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. Thank you so much.
Date: 9/16/2018 1:27:00 PM
so pensively beautiful i am stunned by your creativity, chris...huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2018 10:58:00 AM
Thank you Nette. Your comments always make me smile
Date: 9/15/2018 8:35:00 PM
wow, very poetically dark!!! I quite like this , Chris. a bit different for you and great imagery.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2018 10:58:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea. Yea, I venture to the dark side every once in a while. : )
Date: 9/14/2018 8:13:00 PM
A very deep well written verse, Chris, enjoyed reading my friend..
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Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thank you again Eve for your kindness
Date: 9/14/2018 7:33:00 PM
A dark write done very well, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thanks so very much Kim.
Date: 9/14/2018 5:15:00 PM
Each threesome tells a story and it spirals til' the end. Well written dear Chris. Glad I stopped by your poetry, have a wonderful evening.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/17/2018 10:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much Pixie Dust for your kind words.

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