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Thorn In the Flesh

a thorn pricked her skin so venom oozed out

she laughed it off with one almighty shout

lanced the huge boil and proceeded to reap

ignored sharp pain though the bandage did seep


blessings arrive in all kinds of fashion

when poison left she took to her passion

gathered rose buds and flowers late at night

conquered all fear and abandoned her fright

dreams settled her soul and planted fresh seeds


aware that lush peace was all that one needs

she gave all secateurs away for free

applied soil and compost to her apple tree

next to roses she buried defeat

talked to sweet plants and watered the treat

when she woke again with sadness no more

she minded the morning cleansed to the core


the story’s morale is one single prong

even if painful reveals what is wrong

when life hands out sorrow change direction

for its progress that counts not perfection

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 9/17/2020 3:26:00 AM
Well, Kai. Outstanding poem. Vibrant, emotional, the story of recovery unfolding. Absolutely written for me in this moment... Wisdom in last two lines also poinant, good to always have on board.
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