Thorazine

Crusty tears long dried
Leather arm straps to my side….
Chemically fried
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 2:07 PM
This senryu really hits hard, Robb, and the rhyme adds a lot to the way it flows. Good work! Love, Carolyn
Onclaud Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 10:36 AM
A clever, descriptive write; much enjoyed! nette
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