This Way

its like driving down the road too fast
its like wanting your memory to everlast
its like this rush i get when i say your name
its like after this nothing will ever be the same
its like a ride you get in line for time after time
its like when you smile and fake everything is fine
its like laughing when any second you could cry
its like all the questions answerd but you still ask why
its like me telling this to the world wondering what to say
its like i am wondering if they have ever felt THIS WAY
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Anish Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 9:05 PM
Yes, I wonder sometimes if others are feeling the way I am,too. I like your 'repeating line technique". Keep 'em coming Sincerely yours Matthew Anish
Brown Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 5:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Autumn. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 6:41 PM
Such a joy to read!! there is so much excitement in your words!! :)
Goff Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 6:30 PM
rushing smiles! this fine write be! Autumn!...jim
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