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To my dear friend Daniel and anyone else battling with depression. All my best to you. Hope a bit of light poetry will bring a smile.

 

Life is filled with ups and downs. The straightest path will spin you around. Your in the black. Your in the red. Things stop changing because your dead. The hands of time move on without your tears of joy or fears and doubt. We ride a curve that's undefined. A Winter cruel. A Spring so kind. Take it in and push ahead. The seasons change no matter our tread. Stomping through snow drifts or dancing in rain, running through sunshine or steady winds change. Without a doubt one thing is true, in skies of black or crystal blue. On you feet or on your ***, Gam Zeh Yaavor THIS TOO SHALL PASS! - Jeannie Minor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/16/2016 9:53:00 AM
Splendid with vivid pictures complementing a wonderful block of soul longing lines. A perfect 7 for a wonderful week.
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 5/16/2016 2:49:00 PM
Thanks Funom, hope you have a wonderful week as well!
Date: 3/12/2016 10:10:00 AM
Smiling:)
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 3/12/2016 12:30:00 PM
Glad to hear it, Daniel. Keep writing and posting. Love your rhymes and sonnets.
Date: 3/12/2016 9:41:00 AM
Real great piece Jeannie, a super 7 indeed. Love how you tell it as it is, so realistic and honest, well done and trust you're having great weekend, grace love and peace, Gordon
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 3/12/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Gordon. We're so limited in the ways we can reach out to friends in cyberspace. I understand depression, it's a difficult battle and very easy to get lost in. Thanks again for the visit.
Date: 3/12/2016 9:40:00 AM
Loved it! The flow, the rhyme and the message all touched me ... CayCay
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Jeannie Amos
Date: 3/12/2016 12:17:00 PM
Thank you, Cay. I'm so glad you stopped by. I appreciate the compliment.