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This Tilted Earth

Sun so near us now
Yet we barely feel her warmth
Cold inclination
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 20, 2008 at 4:46 PM
Interesting use of this short form. The reader can view it from different perspectives. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Keep on writing!!!! Karen
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October 30, 2008 at 5:25 PM
Well done Haiku much to see here! Laura :)
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October 30, 2008 at 10:40 AM
Wonderful Haiku Nigel. The sun is out where I am yet it is still cold. Lovely write.
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October 30, 2008 at 10:31 AM
You've got this BANG-on , Nigel... Great last line summery .... Oooops , sorry about the pun ...
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