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This Tilted Earth

Sun so near us now Yet we barely feel her warmth Cold inclination

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Date: 12/20/2008 4:46:00 PM

Interesting use of this short form. The reader can view it from different perspectives. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Keep on writing!!!! Karen

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 10/30/2008 5:25:00 PM

Well done Haiku much to see here! Laura :)

Christopher Higgins

Date: 10/30/2008 10:40:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Nigel. The sun is out where I am yet it is still cold. Lovely write.

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/30/2008 10:31:00 AM

You've got this BANG-on , Nigel... Great last line summery .... Oooops , sorry about the pun ...