John Loving Iii Poet I do not know?

This This This

On such a magical nite like
this this this
A dream can hardly contain a
wish wish wish
Though carefull not to make a
list list list
For it's not by the waving of 
wrist wrist wrist
Nor by pounding of 
fist fist fist
Just a simple request for a
kiss kiss kiss
Could bring a heart much
bliss bliss bliss

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Debbie Duncan January 12, 2013 at 2:46 PM loved the way it rhymes ,,,, thank you for reading my " I was there watching" I do wonder what yo thought it was ;}

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2012 at 3:45 PM this one is lots of fun, john. so why did you say "you gotta be kidding?" did you go see the ad of Joe in his hanes pantyhose? hahaha

Elizabeth Wesley November 3, 2012 at 4:38 PM This shines with great style John; therepetition adds so much andI loved the way it slidethrough the mind as I read! Love, Lizzie

Gwendolen Song November 2, 2012 at 10:56 AM A strong effect...almost like a studder...your repetition works well in this one, John...Have a grand weekend...constantly in prayer for those east coasters affected the most!....luv, gwendolen

Sara Kendrick November 2, 2012 at 10:07 AM Ahhh!!Great work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Jon A Cavanaugh November 2, 2012 at 9:09 AM Very good, good, good, Enjoyed the read.

Carol Sunshine Brown November 2, 2012 at 5:40 AM ~Wow~amazing poetry you have shared with us John III. I have enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back Monday to read more and hope you keep posting more and more. I wish you a wonderful weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. Love, Carol

Charlotte Puddifoot November 2, 2012 at 5:32 AM there's nothing much to say to this this this really is there? but if you behave yourself you might get a kiss kiss kiss...and waving your wrist wrist wrist and pounding your fist fist fist are two things I imagine you do very well :-)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl November 2, 2012 at 2:31 AM This is so good John, and it gets better with each reading xx

Pace Ink-U-Script November 1, 2012 at 7:58 PM This is one creative write...loving the flow!!

Rachel St.Cross November 1, 2012 at 5:47 PM ‡ I Beheld Myself As A Tiny Little Girl Towards The End Of This Sweet Pretty Poem, Beautiful Precious John. Being Lullaby'd By Its Repetitives Soothing Serenty. Sweet Kisses, Rachel *