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This Thing That Was Us

Tho not physical; on a different plain, felt the same. I'll cherish till I turn to dust, this thing that was us. Inspired by the movie, "Her"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/28/2015 8:30:00 AM
Haven't seen the movie, but the poem is fantastic!
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Date: 1/27/2015 10:51:00 AM
how meaningful and poignant in just a few lines, arlene.. yes, this 'woman' really went around.. huggs
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Date: 1/26/2015 6:28:00 PM
I adored that movie, and it was so sad when "she" started dating around. Alas, all good things must often come to an end. Awesome short poem on the topic.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 1/26/2015 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea.. I just saw it and loved it too.. Yes! In love with six hundred and so odd others.. lol. and we think real people are fickle!..
Date: 1/26/2015 3:54:00 PM
I have not seen the movie but deep love is not often physical!! Loved your poem. 7
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Arlene Smith
Date: 1/26/2015 7:52:00 PM
So true, my friend.. Thank you so much, dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

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