This Tempest

this tempest
this bitter tempest
rages through my delicate
fleshy organs
through my flexible
enduring plasma machinery.
i crave for never-ending thunders.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Aye-Addo Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 2:25 AM
Intense, sums up the feeling pretty well.. still feels like there more unsaid
Aye-Addo Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 2:24 AM
Intense, sums up the feeling pretty well.. still feels like there more unsaid
Zzzzz Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 1:44 AM
Interesting and creative write. Well done.
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