Kash Poet Poet Couplet

This Sunset You Gifted Me

I remember a sunset you gifted to me
long ago an afternoon of sun,sky and sea
paintbrush touch changing the sky indigo to pink
golden sun turning soft was about to sink
crimson sky looking down to see its reflection
sea was too turning red its blue already gone
few unknown birds in western sky on their last flight
carrying sundrops on their wings whispered goodnight
soon the sun went down and a hush engulfed all
this sunset you gifted me I can still recall.




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Skat A June 1, 2013 at 2:27 PM CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A June 1, 2013 at 9:55 AM Kash, Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA

Monterey Sirak June 1, 2013 at 7:42 AM You painted stunning beauty with your words.

Carrie Richards May 31, 2013 at 7:57 PM I missed this one the first time.........so glad to see it here....what a beauty it is!! Ps.......I must thank you again for helping me with my entry to Deb's contest......if not for you, I would never have made a placement.....I should share it with you, Kash. thank you again !!

Kim Morrison May 31, 2013 at 6:06 PM Lovely piece! Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown August 10, 2012 at 11:00 AM I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Kash. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi August 8, 2012 at 1:40 AM Aww, u won for this excellent powm, Kash. Big congratulations :D

Carol Sunshine Brown August 1, 2012 at 5:59 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "#192" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A August 1, 2012 at 12:46 AM CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2012 at 10:27 PM KASH, a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS...GOODNIGHT;-) PD

Nette Onclaud July 29, 2012 at 4:49 PM a work to be remembered, kashi bud!.. shouls have placed higher for me. congrats!..:) huggs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders July 28, 2012 at 2:32 PM Beautiful, Kash! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings

David Williams July 28, 2012 at 1:15 PM Kash, congrats on your win, I missed this little gem, very vivid and great rhyme scheme...David

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM soupmail.

Justin Bordner July 24, 2012 at 12:25 PM When did the hearbeat begin? Without refelection Life could not be - I appreciate your trust & mysticism Kash - J.A.B.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 24, 2012 at 9:55 AM I luv the colors here Kash.. lost in ecliptic lines of beauty luv.. a joyous ride .. best wishes to u my friend.. looking at the sunset as a gift is so cool and unique.. always a rare treat ..

Nette Onclaud July 23, 2012 at 12:25 AM thanks for dropping by... edited my glitch, yayyy!... mre later, bud..:) huggs! Nette Onclaud July 23, 2012 at 12:26 AM *more*

Wilma Neels July 22, 2012 at 12:47 PM A glorious write Kash :)

Poet Destroyer A July 22, 2012 at 2:22 AM OCTOBER the 7th here we come...xox~ PD

Jack Horne July 21, 2012 at 10:35 AM lovely write, Kash. Congrats on all your wins : )

Gwendolen Song July 21, 2012 at 3:06 AM Back for a reread, Kash...the gentle rhyming is outta sight! gwendolen

Elizabeth Wesley July 20, 2012 at 10:12 PM I can see it too Kash, you manage to gift me with an unforgettable sunset.

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2012 at 1:46 PM Reads like a winner for sure..Enjoyed reading this descriptive sunset work..Each one is unique and a beauty all its own..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara

Nette Onclaud July 20, 2012 at 9:50 AM happy friday, budsy!..:) huggs!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 20, 2012 at 4:31 AM Just beautiful Kash....love it. - oxox love Anne-Lise

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