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This Sunset You Gifted Me

I remember a sunset you gifted to me long ago an afternoon of sun,sky and sea paintbrush touch changing the sky indigo to pink golden sun turning soft was about to sink crimson sky looking down to see its reflection sea was too turning red its blue already gone few unknown birds in western sky on their last flight carrying sundrops on their wings whispered goodnight soon the sun went down and a hush engulfed all this sunset you gifted me I can still recall. ================000=================

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/1/2013 2:27:00 PM
CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/1/2013 9:55:00 AM
Kash, Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/1/2013 7:42:00 AM
You painted stunning beauty with your words.
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Date: 5/31/2013 7:57:00 PM
I missed this one the first time.........so glad to see it here....what a beauty it is!! Ps.......I must thank you again for helping me with my entry to Deb's contest......if not for you, I would never have made a placement.....I should share it with you, Kash. thank you again !!
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Date: 5/31/2013 6:06:00 PM
Lovely piece! Kim
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Date: 8/10/2012 11:00:00 AM
I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Kash. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2012 1:40:00 AM
Aww, u won for this excellent powm, Kash. Big congratulations :D
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Date: 8/1/2012 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "#192" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2012 12:46:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:27:00 PM
KASH, a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS...GOODNIGHT;-) PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 4:49:00 PM
a work to be remembered, kashi bud!.. shouls have placed higher for me. congrats!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/28/2012 2:32:00 PM
Beautiful, Kash! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings
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Date: 7/28/2012 1:15:00 PM
Kash, congrats on your win, I missed this little gem, very vivid and great rhyme scheme...David
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Date: 7/26/2012 12:00:00 AM
soupmail.
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Date: 7/24/2012 12:25:00 PM
When did the hearbeat begin? Without refelection Life could not be - I appreciate your trust & mysticism Kash - J.A.B.
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Date: 7/24/2012 9:55:00 AM
I luv the colors here Kash.. lost in ecliptic lines of beauty luv.. a joyous ride .. best wishes to u my friend.. looking at the sunset as a gift is so cool and unique.. always a rare treat ..
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Date: 7/23/2012 12:25:00 AM
thanks for dropping by... edited my glitch, yayyy!... mre later, bud..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/23/2012 12:26:00 AM
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Date: 7/22/2012 12:47:00 PM
A glorious write Kash :)
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Date: 7/22/2012 2:22:00 AM
OCTOBER the 7th here we come...xox~ PD
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Date: 7/21/2012 10:35:00 AM
lovely write, Kash. Congrats on all your wins : )
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Date: 7/21/2012 3:06:00 AM
Back for a reread, Kash...the gentle rhyming is outta sight! gwendolen
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Date: 7/20/2012 10:12:00 PM
I can see it too Kash, you manage to gift me with an unforgettable sunset.
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Date: 7/20/2012 1:46:00 PM
Reads like a winner for sure..Enjoyed reading this descriptive sunset work..Each one is unique and a beauty all its own..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara
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Date: 7/20/2012 9:50:00 AM
happy friday, budsy!..:) huggs!
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Date: 7/20/2012 4:31:00 AM
Just beautiful Kash....love it. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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