This Shade of Silence (Trijan Refrain)

This shade of silence withers me
and prunes me back to white,
a near dead branch upon a tree
cast into long-bright nights.
The sun deceives, His face aglow
abreast the earth entombed with snow
the sun deceives
the sun deceives
the earth and everything below.

This shade of silence withers me,
a wound upon my soul
while Winter reigns o'er all that be
abandoned in the cold.
Such quiet seems the sound of death
as if no life were spared and left.
Such quiet seems
such quiet seems
to suckle at my lips, on breath.

This shade of silence withers me,
a haunting Winter hymn, 
a saturating melody
that paints emotions dim.
It curls me up at every tip
and leaves icicles on my lips
it curls me up
it curls me up
until my heart feels like a crypt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 6:59 AM
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Jean. Love and blessings, Carol
Byrne Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 8:05 PM
Your talent is magnificent!
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2010 at 9:24 AM
Thank you for sharing your fasinating poetry today Jean. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. May we all be able to read your poetry here at PoetrySoup for years to come. Love, Carol
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January 21, 2010 at 12:44 AM
The rythm in this poem is classical, a well rhymed poem it is really enjoyable jean
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