This Rose

this rose died in against




as the thorns took over its life




as the last words were spoken




im glad this is over




the thorns began to cray
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 22, 2010 at 4:28 PM
well done, sad, and enjoyed,..p.d.
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May 22, 2010 at 3:49 PM
SAD WRITE, PLENTY OF SENSABLE FEELINGS
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