This Room

all alone in a room
talking to your voice mail
this loneliness is eating at me
it is tearing at my soul
 everything in this room
reminds me of you
your shadows haunts me
the memories are too much
 your scent fills this room
reminding me more of you
while images dance through my mind
eating at my soul
this loneliness won't leave me
 this pain eats at my heart
my bones ache
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 9:35 AM
I am enjoying reading poems here this morning at PoetrySoup. I am glad you shared your writing with us today Donny. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love, good health and lots of inspiration. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 6:48 AM
Nice feelings of longing and lost love
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