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This Poem Really Sucks

( THIS POEM REALLY SUCKS ) Timmy ate a banana and gave jim a pet frog. Booby looked down the street at the apple Kim told Ronnie secrets of wise men asking questions. When does time stand moving down. Why does gorilla`s move standing still Can strippers clean a pose man at night Stop in the name of garbage. For when its told never clap your knees. Does old dogs tell of fables on friday When does young lads commit food Stuff loves never dying thrust Keep the courage to be afraid

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Date: 11/7/2014 10:28:00 PM
haha, some GREAT sucky ones in the contest!! I love the last line though. Cool contradiction.
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/8/2014 3:08:00 AM
Thanks Andrea lol I hope it wins :)
Date: 11/7/2014 10:18:00 PM
You certainly put Greg to shame! He should never had added the thank yous at the end, it made it too humorous to suck.
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/8/2014 3:06:00 AM
lol tooooo funny. Thanks Dan
Date: 11/7/2014 7:41:00 PM
Now that scrambles my brain. . . which is what you meant to do . . . very nice.
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/8/2014 3:03:00 AM
lol thanks David :)
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