This Poem Really Sucks

( THIS POEM REALLY SUCKS )

Timmy ate a banana and gave jim a pet frog.
Booby looked down the street at the apple
Kim told Ronnie secrets of wise men asking questions.
When does time stand moving down.

Why does gorilla`s move standing still
Can strippers clean a pose man at night
Stop in the name of garbage.
For when its told never clap your knees.

Does old dogs tell of fables on friday
When does young lads commit food
Stuff loves never dying thrust
Keep the courage to be afraid
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 10:28 PM
haha, some GREAT sucky ones in the contest!! I love the last line though. Cool contradiction.
Cruz Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:08 AM
Thanks Andrea lol I hope it wins :)
Helppi Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 10:18 PM
You certainly put Greg to shame! He should never had added the thank yous at the end, it made it too humorous to suck.
Cruz Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:06 AM
lol tooooo funny. Thanks Dan
Meade Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 7:41 PM
Now that scrambles my brain. . . which is what you meant to do . . . very nice.
Cruz Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 3:03 AM
lol thanks David :)
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