This Place (Haiku)

(Paint me a picture with your words)


Clear rivers of life 
will flow through this handsome place 
Colored with true love 

© Adell Foster
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2011 at 4:20 PM
Good one..I am glad that I chose this one ro read this eve..Very expressive and descriptive..Your presence at my work lifted my spirits..Sara
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January 30, 2010 at 1:44 PM
What an uplifting view. I always have loved being by the river so I can relate to your wrods. Enjoyed this one. Keep on writing! Karen
Strand Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 12:46 AM
Goood imagery Adell.Rgds Brian & thank you for your kind words today.
Lokken Avatar
August 10, 2009 at 5:59 PM
This is....alive and fresh. Made my heart smile. Love, Sara:)
Richards Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 3:54 PM
Lovely feeling of home....a lovely haiku!!
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