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This Place

In the cold depths of my barren soul, I lay here slowly dying, A very sad sight for one to behold, The doctor just sits there with cold eyes and judging stares, Oh god I'd wish he'd just say something, That way ill know that he's really there. My world is much different than your world, You just couldn't possibly understand, With stares of disgust, pointing fingers unjust, My lifes in the hands of this man. All these pills I must take, To make the voices go away, These pills they don't work, I think im going insane. Silently, numbly drifting, Drifting away to this place, The look of utter horror, Was the look you had on your face , This place is a good place, a safe place for me, You chose it don't you remember? A place were you cant bear to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 11/9/2008 10:28:00 PM
Cynthia, "This Place" is a very well thought out POEM I see several of YOUR POEMS are under the form "I Do not Know" if YOU want more people to read your POEMS YOU should Write a form: Free Verse is always an option I see a lot of Talent in YOUR POETRY LOVEYOUr POETIC Talent...HG
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