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My mind has music from the 80’s circulating my ears I was a kid then and I saw the world differently I still dream and remember how I use to view the world It saddens me how so wrong I was I hold on to that childhood and this world In front of me sickens me This sickness leads to disappointment to never fully be happy Ive been happy but only temporary, it doesn’t seem to stay long I remember things most people forget Im the product of why you shouldn’t remember everything in life or hold on I remember a place where its peaceful, where there is no pain, A place where the music and love rains everyday A place I can get lost in my thoughts and music A place where my creativity flow and glow all around me This place make your insides feel cleansed and refreshed A place I yearn to return This place has been called many things but it’s a place where your soul is free

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Date: 8/6/2019 9:58:00 AM
Hello Lemuel Giviens,I have no idea of where this place is. Except that you do not like to be there. So why are you there. If this is real. Or just a poem. Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/7/2019 12:06:00 PM
Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/6/2019 3:33:00 PM
Hello Lemuel Giviens,oh Heaven..One day we will all end up there. Have a nice day my friend.
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Lemuel Giviens
Date: 8/6/2019 2:40:00 PM
i would love to enter the place in my poem. The place im describing is Heaven, i want to feel worthy of it...

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