This Pain I Shall Survive

This force inside me burns
My whole of heart now yearns,
It's all been taken away
Please bring it back I pray,
Silent screams unspoken
the pain of pieces broken,
I still breathe, I am alive
This pain I shall survive,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 28, 2016 at 6:57 AM
You put a lot of reality in your writing, raw emotions, more than you likely express elsewhere. Very genuine feelings. Makes for good poetry. Keep writing.
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January 28, 2016 at 5:49 AM
Rachel - Morning. Thank you for sharing. Very! powerful. I can relate!, to those feelings 'silent screams unspoken', 'I still breathe, I am alive'. Take good care, thoughts!, Kim
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