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This Old House

This old House __________________________ This old house, clinks and clanks some things are broke, and then some aint Fix it up before it breaks this old house. Could be made of stone, or even mudd but still, it would make a thudd if the heater breaks, it could flood this old house. The boards are a little thin, they creak now and again the cracks, let the sunlight in this old house. It might be just a little old, but worth repair for stories told to keep us warm, from the cold this old house. If it stands, we'll pass it on to our kids, who are grown with a repair list of their own this old house. 5/20/14- Jessica Thompson

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Date: 5/21/2014 5:25:00 PM
It may be an old house but its a home filled with treasured memories. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/21/2014 6:01:00 PM
That is so entirely true, thank you for the kind comment. hugs Jess :)

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