This Night-Visual 5

Travel…
down hill I go
like wingless bird through sky
with nostrils drawing air afresh
this night.



CONTEST:’An American Beauty’ sponsored by Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 1, 2015 at 2:31 PM
OLUSEGUN, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT
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January 28, 2015 at 9:47 AM
I love the unique image you created, Olusegun...congrats on your great win!! Hugs, Rhonda
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January 26, 2015 at 3:48 PM
!!! : > )...Way to go..Sara
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January 25, 2015 at 3:42 PM
This was great imagery. Love the last part, drawing in the fresh air this night. So lovely. Congrats in my contest.
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January 25, 2015 at 3:32 PM
Very well done! Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2015 at 1:43 PM
such incredible imagery many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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January 11, 2015 at 8:29 PM
I enjoyed this poem with it's succinct, descriptive words. Nice write!
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