This Morning So Fine

Fall begins this morning so fine
On the mountain hill, I reside
Crisp fresh air and warm sunshine

Greet me, as everything aligns
The season flows in like the tide
Fall begins this morning so fine

The wispy leaves and plants entwine
Within this scenic walk outside
Crisp fresh air and the warm sunshine

Some trees with color of red wine
Happy thoughts send others to hide
Fall begins this morning so fine

For now this moment, is all mine
For now, only happy tears cried
Crisp fresh air and the warm sunshine

Soulful food, to enjoy and dine
This new day takes me on a ride
Fall begins this morning so fine
Crisp fresh air and the warm sunshine

Heidi Sands

9/24/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Beautiful Villanelle Heidi...best wishes
Sands Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Thank you Joseph ! :)
Sivey Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 9:10 AM
This is a fantastic Villanelle, I love that form! They are tough but when done well, like this one, they can be awesome works of art! I surely loved reading this astounding poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
Sands Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 9:29 AM
Thank you Russell . I like to hear that you enjoy the poems :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:03 AM
lovely.. you have a way with words, heidi... spill ink!...huggs
Sands Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Thank you Nette. That is so kind of you to say! Have a great day ! :)
Pandit Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:18 AM
A beautiful poem--flows like a delightful morning moment--well written, well executed.
Sands Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:51 AM
Thank you Vijay. Good morning ! :)
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