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This Morning So Fine

Fall begins this morning so fine On the mountain hill, I reside Crisp fresh air and warm sunshine Greet me, as everything aligns The season flows in like the tide Fall begins this morning so fine The wispy leaves and plants entwine Within this scenic walk outside Crisp fresh air and the warm sunshine Some trees with color of red wine Happy thoughts send others to hide Fall begins this morning so fine For now this moment, is all mine For now, only happy tears cried Crisp fresh air and the warm sunshine Soulful food, to enjoy and dine This new day takes me on a ride Fall begins this morning so fine Crisp fresh air and the warm sunshine Heidi Sands 9/24/17

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Joseph May

Date: 9/24/2017 9:25:00 AM

Beautiful Villanelle Heidi...best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thank you Joseph ! :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/24/2017 9:10:00 AM

This is a fantastic Villanelle, I love that form! They are tough but when done well, like this one, they can be awesome works of art! I surely loved reading this astounding poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2017 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Russell . I like to hear that you enjoy the poems :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/24/2017 8:03:00 AM

lovely.. you have a way with words, heidi... spill ink!...huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2017 8:05:00 AM

Thank you Nette. That is so kind of you to say! Have a great day ! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/24/2017 7:18:00 AM

A beautiful poem--flows like a delightful morning moment--well written, well executed.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/24/2017 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. Good morning ! :)