This Moment of Feelings

My heart crys but tears cant not come from my eyes i sink an the whole is deep my fall seems forever no one to ketch me no one to brake the chains of pain a bluff i thought i found my king the one instead he turned on me only to leave my heart still hurting from the past an the present seems jus like the last keeping my self from drowning in darkness i sink like a boat with whole as water weighs me down to the bottom of a dark sea my life seems disappointing the only blessings ive recieved r those i concieved an birthed then jesus put the holy ghost in me so i can be free an yet i still fall short in life but i have to believe that jesus has somthing for me in spite of this hellish depressing life
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Agustin Avatar
April 21, 2026 at 8:07 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Andresen Avatar
January 23, 2018 at 1:57 PM
Hello Lauren :) - It is a great pleasure to welcome you and thank you for your first contribution here on Poerty Soup - hugs // Sun :)
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January 22, 2018 at 2:22 PM
An emotive personal poem, a very good first post Lauren.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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January 22, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Lauren, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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