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This Misty Rain

Bearing in mind this weather is Wearing our nerves quite thin. Staring at this misty rain, Daring summer to begin. Sun is what we hoped to find. Fun and sunshine and heat. None is what we have received. One could call Mother Nature a cheat. Oh ! to be shed of constant rain. Foe of our summer fun. Go now! we've had our fill of you. No sign that summer's begun. Me, I've had enough of rain. Free us from this constant drizzle. See the sun for one brief moment, We smile.... its gone..... hopes fizzle. for Rick Parise's Lento contest 21/07/2011

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Date: 8/1/2011 12:54:00 AM
Another winner. Lee
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Date: 7/24/2011 11:09:00 AM
How I wish for some rain but this spring we had plenty. I enjoyed your wonderful verse today.
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Date: 7/22/2011 9:09:00 AM
Excellent use of this somewhat difficult form, Francine. Just read your haiku asking for rain and now I see the other side. I guess whatever weather we're having, we can either find a way to enjoy it or wish for something better. Outstanding entry for Rick's contest. Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/21/2011 2:50:00 PM
nicely done It is very hot here as well. good luck in the contest cory
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Date: 7/21/2011 12:35:00 PM
well I will trade with u .. send u some of this intense heat for some rain.. lovely entreat Francine.. just read and replied to S.M. luv..
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Date: 7/21/2011 11:21:00 AM
hey Francine, yet again a cracking entry, good luck, David
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:42:00 AM
A great entry Francine. I to am longing for summer to begin, I need the heat! and I could do with topping up my tan!! Best wishes in the contest Em :)
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Date: 7/21/2011 10:05:00 AM
francine,you have taken a snapshot of one moment and rendered it for all to delight on... winning wishes in the contest.. :) huggs, nette
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