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This Majestic Place

From a deep coma, I slip away Where the yellow moths and poppies sway And the gentle sun pours crimson gold, On meadows burnished since time of old. It is here that jaybirds decked in fresh reds Whistle dreamy tunes like morn's newly weds, That lingering treetops stand aside As heaven claims me for a long ride. For the wind is pure, a calm it achieves Displaying the glory of dusky leaves--- So majestic is this place where I tread Like a thousand years have dawned and fled. Contest of Laura Urbaniak I Went To Heaven

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Date: 2/18/2016 11:54:00 AM
YOU HAVE AN AWESOME WRITING FLAIR. LINDA
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Date: 12/3/2015 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:53:00 PM
Lyva, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/2/2015 10:38:00 PM
Wonderful write Lyva! Congrats on superb win!!
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:38:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of your contest Lyva.
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Date: 12/2/2015 9:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win and than you for being a part of my contest-lu
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